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by Shangri-la

Heyyo people. This is a poem I wrote (as of yet untitled) I was hoping you could respond with who you think the cloud is, the emerald-eyed star is, whose point of view is, and anything or anyone else that may seem to appear. And if anything comes to you maybe even a title. Please reply at Shangri_La6@hotmail.com 
Ja ne!

All I have is tears and loneliness
Frommy spirit was taken away the things of happiness
They say I have but days to live
Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my precious star
And so my reign of rain shall continue
Until to me she is returned
He took her from me and she to he
O precious star glowing as strongly as the sun
Now hidden always by some distant cloud
I pushed in front of you
But to me it is worse for I am no longer shined upon
Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my presious star
Hidden by a cold cruel cloud
O kind Mistress of the Heavens bonds
I beg smile upon me once again
Can my heart take it any more?
Can my heart take it anymore?
O Heavenly Mistress with emerald green eyes
I beseech, I implore, I who worship you
Break free from behind the cold distant cloud
Shine upon me once more
I tire of this reighn of rain
To hear but a whisper of your words
Would send away this madness
Can my heart truly take it any more?
Can my heart break but once more?
Come to me from your cruel master
Come from behind that cloud
Back to my arms
I am unworthy of such and angel
But he is even more
He who hides you away fromme
Your, friend, Your confidant, Yourlover
But the last you do not know yet
O beloved of the Great Mothers wombs
Come to me from your cruel cloud
I will wait for you on the morrow
If you do not come then
I shall wait each morrow after the next morrow
And so when you come to me
The sorrow will be gone from my heart
And so goes the reign of my rain
Can my heart take that much more?
Can it truly break any more?
...Yes it can take it much much longer
Yes it can break so many times over
Butonly for you my precious star
My darling precious emerald-eyed star.